Mad Science Forums

It's still here!
 
HomePortalGalleryFAQSearchRegisterLog in

Share | 
 

 An Old Friend

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Havoc
Tragically Insane
avatar

Gender : Male
Number of posts : 75
Age : 24

PostSubject: An Old Friend   Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:35 pm

An Old Friend

Cold black eyes staring
From the corner of the room.
Telling you to revert.
To change back again.

You turn away.
You attempt to avoid it.
Yet the voice still remains
And you, quietly weeping.

It cannot here your cries
They will make it stronger.
It will feed off them
Until you are nothing left.

So you linger there in bed
Quiet as you can be.
Pretending not to notice
Yet knowing it knows you do.

Life isn't easy after all
When you change who you are.
And boldly say the words:
You'll never change back.

That part of you remains
Lurking in the corner.
Hungry for those thoughts
You try so hard to forget.

How can one be so stupid
To say such a brave thing.
Knowing the task at hand
And giving in all together.

So now you’re stuck there
All alone in your bed.
Except for your old friend
That person you once were.

_________________
Sleep the dreams away.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Peng
Spider Wizard
Spider Wizard
avatar

Gender : Male
Number of posts : 237
Age : 23

PostSubject: Re: An Old Friend   Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:50 pm

What a lovely poem.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Birdman
Failed Experiment
Failed Experiment
avatar

Gender : Male
Number of posts : 0
Age : 31

Character Sheet
Name:
Weapons: None
Items: Nothing

PostSubject: Re: An Old Friend   Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:00 pm

I liked it too, actually. Just a few purely grammatical bumps. I like the emotions and ideas you conveyed, and can relate to them. Keep it up, dammit.

_________________
Cheesy
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: An Old Friend   

Back to top Go down
 
An Old Friend
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» "Refer a Friend" program on Taiwan Servers?
» Emzan Writes A Creepy Poem With The Help Of Her Dopey Friend Shyanne!
» To Request a Gift on your Friend's Wall: 
» Accidently deleted friend
» Trimming friend list question

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Mad Science Forums :: Public Area :: Roleplay :: Stories :: Poems-
Jump to: