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PostSubject: --   Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: --   Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:37 pm

It made me go D':

Which is a good thing.

Also, this line :

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I was born to become a destroyer of this Earth, and because of that I must be so.

Very powarfulz. Your story hit it's climax just right.


Your biggest problem is always grammar, but hopefully your comp classes will iron that out. I could try to go into detail, but I'm a pretty crappy teacher. It's all intuition. Regardless, I'll expound if you want.

Once again, keep it up. I definitely like your short stories more than your poems, simply because I like.... stories. Cheesy

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